英语作文作为高考英语试卷的压轴题,是考验同学英语综合能力最重要的一个题目。不仅能检测同学的词汇量,还要求同学能正确地运用语法。尽量把文章的内容写得尽善尽美,这样才能拿高分。
今日学习:如何写感谢信。
感谢信写作要素
表明写作意图——对…的感谢(句型)
说明理由(具体理由/具体事例)
再次表示感谢及表达视福(句型)
感谢信常见句型
表 达 感 谢
I am writing this letter to thank you for.….
I would like to convey in this letter my sincere gratitude to you for.….
With deepest gratitude I write you this lefter.
感 谢 理 由
I still remember that when I was…
The memory is sill fresh in mind that.….
Had it not been for you rencouragement and guidance in….,I fear that I couldn’t have achieved so much. (倒装+虚拟 要不是您的鼓励和指导,我可能不会.….)
Everyone will agree that it was you who.. (强调句 正是您给了我指导 )
I shall always remember your help. It not only …,,but also …
Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.
I appreciate it more than I can say.
再 次 表 示 感 谢 及 祝 福
My true gratitude is beyond words.
Please accept my appreciation and best wishes.
I wishyou good health and good luck.
I wish happiness may follow you everywhere.
I hope that I will have the opportunity of returning your kindness by doing..
写作任务
假定你是李华,目前在你校的友好学校美国 Wilson High School学习交流,并将于下周一回国。请通过电子邮件给该校校长Mr.Smith 写一封感谢信。
注意∶ 1.词数 100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr.Smith
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
审 题
文体∶ 感谢信
人称∶ 第一人称,第二人称
时态∶现在时,过去时
要点∶ 简要自我介绍;表达感谢;感谢的理由(你的收获)
选 材
具体事例(—次活动,一次帮助,鼓励,指导,我的改变)
具体收获(能力,知识,态度,视野,人际交往……)
谋 篇
Part one 自我介绍写信意图
Part two 感谢的理由/具体收获
Part three 总结+再次感谢+祝福
要 点 展 开
be warmly received
patient, kind, considerate, caring people great learning resources and excellent teachers
proper arrangements
classes of different subjects
acquire knowledge and gain skills
establish good relationships with the students
be more familiar with the culture and customs
范 文 赏 析
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China visiting your school now.How time flies!I’ve been here for several weeks and will be back home next Monday.I would like to convey in this letter my sincere gratitude to you.
The memory is still fresh in my mind that on my arriving here, I was,warmly received. Thanks to the lovely and considerate people around me, I adapted to the new life here much faster than I had expected. During my stay here, I’ve learnt so much about your school. The great learning resources and excellent teachers in your school have impressed me deeply. Thanks to your proper arrangements, I have attended many classes of different subjects such as natural science,logic,engineering and so on.
Meanwhile, the participation in various camps have allowed me to experience outdoor adventures, to explore nature, to think critically and to meet challenges bravely. What is more important is that I have established good relationships with some students in your school and got more familiar with your culture and customs.I appreciate it more than I can say.
Thank you for your help and support again.I sincerely hope you can visit my school someday. I hope that I will have the opportunity of returning your kindness by receiving you in China.I wish you good health and good luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
写 作 模 板
Dear____,
I’m____.I would like to convey in this letter my sincere gratitude to you.
The memory is still fresh in my mind that__. Thanks to__,I__.Meanwhile,___. What is more important is that___. I appreciate it more than I can say.
Thank you for your help and support again. I sincerely hope ____ . I hope that I will have the opportunity of returning your kindness by ____.I wish you good health and good luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作练习
题一:假定你是李华,去年作为一名交换生(exchange student)去美国学习,得到了布朗一家的照顾,回国后准备写一封感谢信给布朗夫妇,要点如下:
1. 感谢生活上的关心,克服了思乡病;
2. 感谢学习上的帮助,口语进步很大;
3. 欢迎到中国做客。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brown,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
参 考 范 文
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brown,
How are things going with you recently? Thank you so much for giving me a chance to live in your family while I was an exchange student in America!
That was such a hard time for me. Had it not been for your kindness and warm heart, I fear that I couldn’t have overcome my homesickness much faster than I had expected. What’s more, you tutored me in my spoken English in daily life. With your help, I made such rapid progress that I won the first place in the English Speaking Competition of the city.
Thank you for your help and support again. I sincerely hope you can visit China someday. I hope that I will have the opportunity of returning your kindness by receiving you in China. Wish you good health and good luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
题二:假定你是李华,现在是北京大学(Peking University)大一新生。你高三时在王老师的帮助下,英语进步很大,为表示感谢,给王老师写一封感谢信。要点如下:
1. 梦想成真,考上理想大学;
2. 因为王老师的辅导和鼓励,英语由差变好;
3. 对老师表示祝福。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Mr. Wang,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
参 考 范 文
Dear Mr. Wang,
How are things going with you recently? How time flies! I’ve been a student of Peking University. I would like to convey in this letter my sincere gratitude to you.
Had it not been for your help and encouragement, I fear that I couldn’t have been a student of Peking University. I still remember the days when you taught me English in Grade 3 of senior high school. It’s you who tried to tutor me after class patiently, encouraged me to participate in English contest and gave me some useful advice on English learning. My English was greatly improved because of your encouragement and support.
My true gratitude is beyond words. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Wish you have a healthy body and lead a happy life!
Yours,
Li Hua